Editing Rough draft MWK (section)

==Washington D.C. 2011, 24 hours earlier==

When Robert got home he was exhausted from a hard day at work. He had just spent a chunk of his pay check at a gas pump. Tomorrow, he would be going on a business trip to Hawaii. He slept that night dreaming of warm water and soft sandy beaches.

Beep! Beep! Beep! Robert almost hit the alarm clock so hard he was lucky it wasn't pulverized. Thankfully, his flight was at 8:00 p.m. Unfortunately, he had left his alarm clock on. He had twelve hours until his flight.