Atlantis: chapter 8

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Okay I'm going to stop with the super genius thing.

And of course, this is chapter 8.

Please note this is a work in progress and the authors reserve the right to edit and/or reformat the book. Also note that in this writing we mean no disrespect to any country reading this. A book merely needs protagonists and antagonists.

Atlantis: Chapter VII

Paul looked out over the terrain for the thousandth time in five and a half hours. Nothing had changed. The same view of the same moonlight riddled jungle, the LED spotlights revealing more empty dirt and vegetation. Nothing alarming or even remotely threatening.

Paul had to try hard not to close his eyes. Even a top-notch elite soldier got tired.

Sitting next to him, Rob was wide awake, eyes enlarged to the proportions of golf balls.

"Did you hear that!?!" Rob asked.

"What?" Paul yawned.

"That!" Rob pointed wildly out at the sea of emerald green.

Paul shook his head and looked again at the newbie's nonexistent assailant. "Green horn." He muttered under his breath. Rob was the worst person to be stuck on watch with. He jumped at the slightest noise, and he insisted on keeping his carbine tightly in his vice-like grip. He personally loaded belts of ammunition into the chain guns, as he didn't trust the speedy machine loaders all the CGT's came with. On the other hand, if something did attack, Paul could be sure the new guy would know before anything else did, despite the UCAVs flying overhead with infrared beams scraping the landscape.

Paul was supposed to have his NVG's (night vision goggles) on, but why bother? Rob had his tightly fastened around his head, his goggle filters displaying a hybrid of thermal and infrared viewing. Rob was pacing the railing of the CGT, head turned out towards the jungle, hands tightly gripping his carbine in a death grip while he twitched and jittered. Paul was actually mildly afraid that Rob would accidentally jump off the tower.

So far this watch was the most boring of Paul's career. He almost wanted something to come up. Only half an hour more until his shift was over...

Paul must have fallen asleep because the next thing he knew, Rob was sitting on a stool next to the railing, still looking out over the jungle. Paul stretched his arms and was about to open his mouth to ask how long he had been out when Rob raised a four fingers, indicating silence. It was then Paul saw why Rob was so still.

The recruit was sitting ram rod straight, completely silent, only his eyes darting around under his goggle lenses. And he was clutching at the chain gun in the same death hold he had with his carbine. Only tighter.

Whats the matter? Paul sent telepathically to Rob. The recruit jumped slightly at the mental message, but then quickly sent back,

They're everywhere...

What is? Paul asked, mildly concerned.

Oh my god, we're dead men...

...call the others?...

...No... one twitch and we'll all be gone... Rob's thoughts were less sent messages and just thought. Paul had to mentally lean closer to pick them up.

What, is, it. Paul sent, calmly and slowly.

Look. Was Rob's only answer.

And Paul did. He would take the sight to his grave.

Thousands of them. Maybe a hundred thousand. The emerald sea of green cast by his NVG's as well as the natural color of the forest seemed to be... moving. But the plants were still. It was the things on top of them that were the threat.

Raptors. A hundred thousand Raptors? That was impossible! How could there have been so many in the world? Not good at al-

A universal growl permeated the air. As one, the Raptors' lips curled up in a menacing half rumble half howl. The sound chilled Paul's bones...

Rob opened fire. It was a futile effort to kill a hundred thousand Raptors, but Rob was going down fighting if he had to die.

Paul could only sit. He didn't have the strength of willpower to resist as the Raptors clambered up the CGT like gymnists, jumping ten feet in the air and jumping straight off one of the support struts. Nor could Paul even think as he watched Rob torn apart and gored through by the vicious Raptors. He didn't even feel anything as a Raptor slashed him from behind...


Paul awoke with a start. He jumped out of his seat, his against-regs magazine spilling onto the floor. The first thing he did was feel his body for cuts. Nothing. He was mercifully whole, but Rob-

Rob! At the sound of Paul's magazine hitting the floor, Rob spun around with his carbine raised, looking away from the jungle for the first time on the watch shift. He was unhurt. Not so much as a scratch. But Paul could have sworn... no. It was just a dream. More of a nightmare. But not for real.

Rob tentatively lowered his weapon at Paul's upturned hands.

He breathed a huge sigh of relief. "Sorry," Rob said. "I get jumpy."

"You don't say." Paul muttered.

"What happened?" Rob asked.

"Nightmare. Thats all." Paul said reassuringly, though inside he still felt shaky.

"No, I mean, what happened in you nightmare?" Rob asked.

"We were, uhh, surrounded by Raptors. Tons of them. Maybe a hundred thousand. You and I got slashed to pieces." Paul said haltingly.

Rob laughed. "Should we call the others, then?"

"No, we're fine..."

Rob turned to see what Paul was looking at. His eyebrows raised inches until Paul was again afraid that his eyes would pop out of their sockets. Standing in the middle of a moonlit clearing was an American soldier. And his IFF was displayed as, "Kenderson, Matthew, Field Commander".


Tom was already up when they came looking for him. He was siting on top of the stockade wall, looking out over the Raptor pen and up at the sunrise now claiming the sky. A bloody red light was rising over the trees. In front of it were gorgeous orange and yellow hues working their way up the midnight blue sky. Tom breathed out and inhaled deeply, thankful to be alive and well, so he'd have the opportunity to see this. At that moment, he felt himself lucky, despite all the war, the hardship, the pain that his battles were.

MY battles. Tom thought. It was at moments like this where he could just appreciate life. Life and death.

He looked down, fifteen feet below his, at a juvenile Raptor looking hungrily up at Tom.

They can get out. Tom thought. Why don't they? Just one hop, onto the wood, and over, or maybe they could even claw their way through the wood, or dig under it. Why don't they?

Needless to say there was a large portion of men guarding the pen at all times. They even sacrificed a whole CGT to guard it. Even if they did get out, they wouldn't get very far. Their were only twenty of them in their, and should they attempt escape they would be

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