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So, same rules apply here as well as on Brandon book, [[Atlantis]] Rising. Please excuse any religious or opinionated writing, do not be offended by the cast of enemies, etc.
 
So, same rules apply here as well as on Brandon book, [[Atlantis]] Rising. Please excuse any religious or opinionated writing, do not be offended by the cast of enemies, etc.
  
Awesome book all in all, so check it out. Oh and if I insult Brandon it's only 'cause I see him as a brother.  
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Awesome book all in all, so check it out. Oh and if I insult Brandon it's only 'cause I see him as a brother. Don't worry he will get me back in his book.
  
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I also have started working on another story
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[[Halo Shock Force]]
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STATUS OF BOOK
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CH 1- Finished
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CH 2- Combined with chapter 3
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CH 3- Combined with chapter 2
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CH 4- Being Edited by my wonderful comrade in arms
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CH 5- I'm working on it
 
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[[Reaper's First Drop: Chapter 5]]
 
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Placed in Kiev
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I stood in the middle of the street watching the supers close in on the front lines. It was a slaughter. I wasn't allowed to help though. My orders were to not engage. I watched as a pair of flamers walked up to the entrenchment line and let loose a torrent of flame into the men hiding behind the sandbags and barbed wire. I watched as Marines were crisped inside CROC-5 armor and Rangers flailed around on the ground in agony as their armor crumpled and imploded from heat and their skin blackened and fried from the heat and flame. I smell the grease from their cooking bodies as it dripped from their quickly liquifying skin.
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A Sword pushed through the barbed wire, barbs scratching across his armor, using his sword to cut his way through. He stepped up on the small wall that some Rangers had recently been occupying, well until a mortar hit killing them instantly. The Sword lifted his shotgun up to a young soldiers chest and pulled the trigger. A hole a foot in diameter was blown straight through his back. Another was quickly impaled on the Supers blade. A Golaith following the his brothers example, waded through the defensive line and slammed his gun down onto a marine crushing the mans skull. Another jumped the line and slammed a young soldier into the wall, powdering the man's ribcage. I looked past the line to see a second wave. Some 50 Supers advancing towards my front line.
  
"Covering fire" Serpent yelled, her 50 cal soon drowned out all other sound as she fired from her entrenched position. Soon all the rest of the Angels opened up with various heavy weapon's we had scavenged from the armory. The three man S&D squad barely flinched at the onslaught. One of the Super's stopped and fired a few burst's into the hidden Angels. I mentally went through all of our meeting's with the metal goliath's. They all added up to one thing. They couldn't fire those giant chaingun's while moving. They always had to brace themselves.
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This wasn't war, this was a slaughter, and I couldn't do anything to help. I was forced to watch as the men under my command were ravaged and slain. Just then my aid signaled me that I was getting an incoming message from a higher up.
  
"Anytime Wolf." Serpent said over the comm.
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"Angel 27 this is General Hayes I'm giving you three pairs of Gremlin fighters. This is all the support I can get to you right now. Good luck."
  
"Keep your panties on Serpent. They still need to move a couple feet." Rouge shot back.
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"Roger that Sir." I said before opening a comm with said fighters.
  
"Just a few more feet." The squad seemed to want to comply."Now."  
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"Lone Wolf, this is Gremlin One-Seven-One, what are your orders."  
  
Rouge rose from the rubble where he had buried himself, chunks of debris falling from his frame as he sprinted towards the Super on the left. He reeled back and shoved his spike into the joint between the helmet and the shoulder pauldren. The spike was an improvised explosive that I had made from a railroad spike and lots and lots of good old C4
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"I want a pair of you to come straight down the street towards my location. I have supers overrunning my lines and we are about to break. If we are defeated they will have a straight shot at the capital building and we still have one hour before everyone is evacuated. We have to hold. Unload everything you have on the monsters on the other side of my line and then pull out to get resupplied, the rest of you circle the city and make sure no enemy air units enter this fight."
  
Rouge gave one last good shove before the Super slammed the side of his gun arm into Rouge's stomach. Rouge was sent flying into the wall. He landed at the base and the wall, damaged to severely to hold up, toppled down on top of him.  
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"But Sir the 100 yard protocal says....."
  
"Rouge." I yelled. I leaped from my hiding place on the second floor balcony of a nearby building. I slid my spike into the same joint. It slid pretty far in but in my haste to get their attention off Rouge I didn't put all my momentum behind it. The Super toppled, unready for my extra weight. I rolled off him and straight into the Flamers leg. He pointed his weapon at me but I kicked it upwards, the flame shooting just over my head. I pulled my self up and dove for Rouge's battered form. I pushed the detonator mid-dive and was propeled forward towards my target. I ignored the searing heat on my back and grabbed a hold of Rouge's shoulder, dragging him the last couple feet to cover.  
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I watched as an older Marine's side was torn open by another shotgun blast. The advancing line of Supers was an imposing sight.
  
"You alright" I said through clenched teeth.
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"I don't have time, they are breaking through, DO IT NOW."
  
"Yeah just dandy. How are you." He groaned
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"Yes sir."
  
"I love my job." I replied rolling over and pushing myself to my knees.
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Almost immeadeatly I heard the roar of a jet behind me. I watched the regs cringe at the sound of the engines and saw a pair of shadow's pass over me. Another 200 yards and then they opened up. The roar of the macine guns deafened all that still had their hearing and I watched in satisfaction as the supers on the other side of the line were torn apart by bullets. The Gremlins let loose their missiles and at once I saw a super catch one to the chest. Almost as fast as they had come the two fighters disappeared. The advancing Supers had not only been halted, they had been torn apart, none were left unhurt.The remaining infantry, emboldened by the air strike, rallied together and drove the remaining Supers back from our lines.

Latest revision as of 21:45, 9 December 2010

Yo everybody,

I'm Brandon's friend Jamie Knox. This is my book.

So, same rules apply here as well as on Brandon book, Atlantis Rising. Please excuse any religious or opinionated writing, do not be offended by the cast of enemies, etc.

Awesome book all in all, so check it out. Oh and if I insult Brandon it's only 'cause I see him as a brother. Don't worry he will get me back in his book.

I also have started working on another story Halo Shock Force

STATUS OF BOOK

CH 1- Finished

CH 2- Combined with chapter 3

CH 3- Combined with chapter 2

CH 4- Being Edited by my wonderful comrade in arms

CH 5- I'm working on it


Reaper's First Drop: Chapter 1

Reaper's First Drop: Chapter 2

Reaper's First Drop: Chapter 3

Reaper's First Drop: Chapter 4

Reaper's First Drop: Chapter 5


Placed in Kiev

I stood in the middle of the street watching the supers close in on the front lines. It was a slaughter. I wasn't allowed to help though. My orders were to not engage. I watched as a pair of flamers walked up to the entrenchment line and let loose a torrent of flame into the men hiding behind the sandbags and barbed wire. I watched as Marines were crisped inside CROC-5 armor and Rangers flailed around on the ground in agony as their armor crumpled and imploded from heat and their skin blackened and fried from the heat and flame. I smell the grease from their cooking bodies as it dripped from their quickly liquifying skin.

A Sword pushed through the barbed wire, barbs scratching across his armor, using his sword to cut his way through. He stepped up on the small wall that some Rangers had recently been occupying, well until a mortar hit killing them instantly. The Sword lifted his shotgun up to a young soldiers chest and pulled the trigger. A hole a foot in diameter was blown straight through his back. Another was quickly impaled on the Supers blade. A Golaith following the his brothers example, waded through the defensive line and slammed his gun down onto a marine crushing the mans skull. Another jumped the line and slammed a young soldier into the wall, powdering the man's ribcage. I looked past the line to see a second wave. Some 50 Supers advancing towards my front line.

This wasn't war, this was a slaughter, and I couldn't do anything to help. I was forced to watch as the men under my command were ravaged and slain. Just then my aid signaled me that I was getting an incoming message from a higher up.

"Angel 27 this is General Hayes I'm giving you three pairs of Gremlin fighters. This is all the support I can get to you right now. Good luck."

"Roger that Sir." I said before opening a comm with said fighters.

"Lone Wolf, this is Gremlin One-Seven-One, what are your orders."

"I want a pair of you to come straight down the street towards my location. I have supers overrunning my lines and we are about to break. If we are defeated they will have a straight shot at the capital building and we still have one hour before everyone is evacuated. We have to hold. Unload everything you have on the monsters on the other side of my line and then pull out to get resupplied, the rest of you circle the city and make sure no enemy air units enter this fight."

"But Sir the 100 yard protocal says....."

I watched as an older Marine's side was torn open by another shotgun blast. The advancing line of Supers was an imposing sight.

"I don't have time, they are breaking through, DO IT NOW."

"Yes sir."

Almost immeadeatly I heard the roar of a jet behind me. I watched the regs cringe at the sound of the engines and saw a pair of shadow's pass over me. Another 200 yards and then they opened up. The roar of the macine guns deafened all that still had their hearing and I watched in satisfaction as the supers on the other side of the line were torn apart by bullets. The Gremlins let loose their missiles and at once I saw a super catch one to the chest. Almost as fast as they had come the two fighters disappeared. The advancing Supers had not only been halted, they had been torn apart, none were left unhurt.The remaining infantry, emboldened by the air strike, rallied together and drove the remaining Supers back from our lines.

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